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Ilustrate the nitrogen cycle given in picture

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The diagram illustrates the Nitrogen gas cycle. It shows how’s the gas is automatically provided to the living organisms and then turns to the atmosphere. Firstly from the lightening, the gas is contributes to the roots of the plants in the form of nitrates. When the plants or animals dies it putrefy the bacteria and changes into ammonium then into nitrite and then itno the nitrates. Further, the following process into ammonium with the help of the bacteria. Furthermore, the ammonium converted from the nitrites into the nitrates and after that it forms protein. Some of the nitrates are degraded into the nitrogen gas in the denitrification. Then the nitrogen gas goes back to the atmosphere and mixed up with it.
The diagram illustrates the Nitrogen
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cycle. It
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how’s the
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provided to the living organisms and then turns to the atmosphere.

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from the lightening, the
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is contributes to the roots of the plants in the form of nitrates. When the plants or animals
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dies
it putrefy the bacteria and
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into ammonium then into nitrite and then
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the nitrates.
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of the bacteria.

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, the ammonium converted from the nitrites into the nitrates and after that it forms protein.
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nitrates
are degraded
into the nitrogen
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in the denitrification. Then the nitrogen
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goes back to the atmosphere and mixed up with it.

IELTS academic Ilustrate the nitrogen cycle given in picture

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