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Side Effects of Modern Technology

Side Effects of Modern Technology 70dM2

Side effects of modern technology is a term that describe suffering from dangerous effects coming from the convenience and efficiency of living with technology. As mention by the writer, modern technology can bring side effects causing physical problems such as aches and pains included by overuses of electronic devices. The professor demonstrates side effects of modern technology by giving two examples hearing loss and carpal tunnel syndrome which the most common symptoms that are found because of using electronic devices every day. The first example discussed by the professor is hearing loss. According to the lecturer, To hear quiet noises hearing loss may happen when listening to music with earphones at high volumes for several hours without stopping. Developing hearing loss, it's almost impossible to reverse. Another example that the professor mention is carpal tunnel syndrome. What she means that Giving numbness and pain in the hand and wrist. The prolonged use of the same muscles can make it painful to form a fist grasp, small objects or perform manual tasks. People with this symptoms start to feel a sharp and piercing pain through the wrist and later up the arm.

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describe
 suffering from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 effects coming from the convenience and efficiency of living with technology.

As mention by the writer, modern technology can bring side effects causing physical problems such as aches and pains included by overuses of electronic devices.

The professor demonstrates side effects of modern technology by giving two examples hearing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdebtdisasteraccidentfalldamagefailure
loss
 and carpal tunnel syndrome which the most common symptoms that are found
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of using electronic devices every day.

The first
 example discussed by the professor The verb 'hearing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
is hearing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdebtdisasteraccidentfalldamagefailure
loss
. According to the lecturer, To hear quiet noises hearing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdebtdisasteraccidentfalldamagefailure
loss
 may happen when listening to music with earphones at high volumes for several hours without stopping. Developing hearing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdebtdisasteraccidentfalldamagefailure
loss
, it's almost impossible to reverse.

Another example that the professor mention is carpal tunnel syndrome. What she means that Giving numbness and pain in the hand and wrist. The prolonged This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of the same muscles can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it painful to form a fist grasp, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 objects or perform manual tasks.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 with Did you mean "these"?these
this
 symptoms This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 to feel a sharp and piercing pain through the wrist and later up the arm. 