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Overall, it is clear that the general trend of divorce was declining in Sweden, whereas this was fluctuating in Finland.

Overall, it is clear that the general trend of divorce was declining in Sweden, whereas this was fluctuating in Finland. WgJjN
The bar chart illustrate the percentage of divorces. Finland and Sweden between 2011 and 2015. Sweden's divorce rate was about 45% in 2011, being higher than finland's rate by approximately 8%. Then, it rose to almost fifty percent in 2012. However, the figure showed a gradual decrease to about 47% in 2013, and continued to decline steadily to the end of the period, reaching around 45% in 2014 and hitting a low point of about 37% in 2015. Turning to the percentage of divorces in Finland was less than 40% in 2011, and it decreased in 2012. However, the figure experienced a steady growth during the next two years. It rose to approximately 39% in 2013, then increased by around 3% in 2014, and remained steady for the next year, outracing the rate of Sweden. Overall. Sweden experienced a downward trend, while Finland showed an upward trend throughout the period. Both countries divorces rate are having flactuation.
The bar chart illustrate the percentage of
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. Finland and Sweden between 2011 and 2015. Sweden's
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divorce
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rate
was about 45% in 2011, being higher than
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by approximately 8%. Then, it rose to almost fifty percent in 2012.
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, the figure
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showed
a gradual decrease to about 47% in 2013, and continued to decline
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of the period, reaching around 45% in 2014 and hitting a low point of about 37% in 2015. Turning to the percentage of
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in Finland was less than 40% in 2011, and it decreased in 2012.
However
, the figure experienced a steady growth during the
next
two years. It rose to approximately 39% in 2013, then increased by around 3% in 2014, and remained steady for the
next
year, outracing the
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of Sweden.
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. Sweden experienced a downward trend, while Finland
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showed
an upward trend throughout the period. Both countries
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are having
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.
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IELTS academic Overall, it is clear that the general trend of divorce was declining in Sweden, whereas this was fluctuating in Finland.

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