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The sales of three major book publishers betweeon 2020 to 2030

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The line graph compares the sales of three different types of comic book demonstrator, over a decade. As the diagram suggests, in 2020, MARVEL book was on the top with a sale of copies that under approximately 550 million, followed by DC, book of copies at almost 200 million and VALIANT book of copies at almost 100 million. From 2020 to 2024, MARVEL sale will increase slightly and it will peak at around 600 million copies. After some fluctuations, it will reach bottom of the line in 2030, close to 740 million in copies. In contrast, over a six years period, between 2020 to 2026, the sales of DC and VALIANT book copies will minimally increase and equaled at around 300 million. Next ten years, the sales of DC and MARVEL book sharply increase and skyrocket while the sales of VALIANT book will gradually increase, both will average 550 millions in copies. overall, the sales of MARVEL book copies showed an upward trend wherein DC and VALIANT sales of comic book copies represented as like as similliar trend.
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As the diagram suggests, in 2020,
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MARVEL
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that under approximately 550
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IELTS academic The sales of three major book publishers betweeon 2020 to 2030

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