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The charts gives information about different resources who produce energy

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The Circular Charts Illustrate Changes Prcentage of the Energy Production from various Sources which are oil, natural gas Coul, nuclear, hydro and other Lenewable in between 1985 and 2003. Overall, oil was the best option for Producing the energy. Let's Start with year 1985. In this year, most of Power was generated by the on which was 52%. Nuclear was the second material to generate the energy which was 22 olo. Goal was manufactured 8 olo of the Power. After that, 13000 of the energy Greated by the natural gas, Hydro and othed lenewable resources were Produced almost equivalent amount of the energy which was 4olo and l olo Lespectives. Now, talking about the year 2003. Also, in this year first priority was given by the oil to g nekated the power which was 39. 010. Coal and Natural gas was Came in second position to produce the energy which was 22 olo and 2300. Inl020013 1 8 olo of the power was manufactured by the Coal Hydro and other renewable were Produced same amount of the energy which was 4% Coal use was reduced in the year 2003 compared to 1985. Also, in this 2003 Natural gas, hydro and other renewable resources Consumption was increased match with tear 1985.
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Production from various Sources which are oil,
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natural
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gas
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, nuclear, hydro and other
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Lenewable
in between 1985 and 2003.
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year
1985. In this
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year
, most of
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Power
was generated
by the on which was 52%. Nuclear was the second material to generate the
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energy
which was 22
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olo
. Goal
was manufactured
8
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olo
of the
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Power
. After that, 13000 of the
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energy
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Greated
by the
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natural
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gas
, Hydro and
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othed
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lenewable
resources
were Produced
almost equivalent amount of the
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energy
which was 4olo and l
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olo
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Lespectives
.
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2003.
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first
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power
which was 39. 010. Coal and
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gas
was Came in second position to produce the
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energy
which was 22
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olo
and 2300. Inl020013 1 8
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olo
of the
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power
was manufactured
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were Produced
same amount of the
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energy
which was 4% Coal
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was
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2003 compared to 1985.
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, in this 2003
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Natural
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gas
, hydro and other renewable resources Consumption
was increased
match with tear 1985.

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