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Scientists predict that in future car will be driven by computer

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According to the Survey Conducted by the Oxford University it was noted that most of the Countries Scientists said that in the near future Cars will be driven by the technology like Computers. . Firstiy I will talk about the reasons behind thise. Now - a - days we Gan see technology is growing by leaps and bounds. So Robitics are reduced People work. Also, Car is driving by Computers then people can Save the time. Furthermore, Public can go for Short vacation at that time Car is operated by the automatic system so they can spend their time with kith and kin during driving. For instance, two to three years ago Ceoogle made one Car which was operated by the Computers Merely, people can sit in the car and set the map. Then, Computers are driving Gal and Public reached their destination. Sometimes, during driving People Gan mistake thus, with use of technology reduced the error. Morever, because of safety purposes Person. This ststen is best for the Secondly will talk about negative de velopment of this System First is Unemployment increased. . Nume nous numbers of people left their driving jobs. Because of that they do not bolsted their family in terms of money. Furthermore, and technology does not Goourate all the time. future big accidents will be occured due to computers driven car. Sometimes technical fault 15 came at that time they crates Consequences which are unpredictable. To Conclude, I personally believe that in near future Computers will take the place of driver and driving car on load more and more Changes will come in technology in future because of that people work load will be reduced.
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that most of the Countries Scientists said that in the near
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Car
is operated
by the automatic system
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time
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driving
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Gal and Public reached their destination.
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Computers will take the place of driver and
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IELTS academic Scientists predict that in future car will be driven by computer

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