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The given diagram represents the steps involved in the manufacturing of bricks which are used by building industry. The following paragraphs will give us a detailed information regrading the whole process. The first step during the preparation of bricks involves the digging of clay with the help of a digger. Then the clay is placed on a roller with the use of a metal grid. The product thus formed is mixed with salt and water. From there the bricks can be formed either by passing through the cutter or by moulding the clay into bricks. The bricks thus formed, are placed in a drying oven for one or two days. After drying with oven, they are kept in a kiln with moderate and high temperature ranging from 200-980 and 870-1300 degree celsius respectively. After that they are placed in a cooling chamber for maximum of three days. At last, the bricks are packed and are ready for delivery. It is clear that the process of formation of bricks includes digging, moulding, drying and cooling to make them ready for building purposes.

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given
 diagram represents the steps involved in the manufacturing of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 which are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 by building industry. The following paragraphs will give us 'information' is a mass noun (i.e., uncountable). Therefore, the preceding 'a' is probably wrong.detailed information
a detailed information
 regrading the whole process. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
first
 step during the preparation of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 involves the digging of clay with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of a digger. Then the clay is placed
 on a roller with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of a metal grid. The product thus
 formed is mixed
 with salt and water. From there the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 can be formed
 either by passing through the cutter or by Possible spelling mistake. 'moulding' is British English.molding
moulding
 the clay into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
thus
 formed, are placed
 in a drying oven for one or two days. After drying with oven, they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 in a kiln with moderate and high temperature ranging from 200-980 and 870-1300 degree Possible spelling mistake found.Celsius
celsius
respectively
. After that they are placed
 in a cooling chamber for maximum of three days. At last, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
are packed
 and are ready for delivery. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the process of formation of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 includes digging, Possible spelling mistake. 'moulding' is British English.molding
moulding
, drying and cooling to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them ready for building purposes. 