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The maps illustrate the plan to redevelop the Southwest airport in the following year.

The maps illustrate the plan to redevelop the Southwest airport in the following year. PLrG2
The maps illustrate the plan to redevelop the Southwest airport in the following year. Overall, although this development will retain the 3-block-complex design of the airport consisting of departure/arrival halls, security area, and the pier, there will be some significant changes to the pier as well as the construction of new architectural features. Looking at the maps, the pier will undergo a notable change, which will be expanded towards both the top-right and top-left corners for the addition of ten more gates. Furthermore, the walkway will be cleared to make way for the sky train a year later. Moving to the departure/arrival area, the bag drop zone will replace the check-in zone, which will be moved to the opposite side. Also, the café will be relocated to the left corner of the entrance. Moreover, there will be an expansion in the area of the arrival hall, and the car hire area will be established in the new ground. Additionally, a café and an ATM zone will be added on the same side of the car hire zone. Finally, there is no remarkable change in the security area, except for the appearance of shops near the security passport control.
The maps illustrate the plan to redevelop the Southwest airport in the following year.

Overall
, although this development will retain the 3-block-complex design of the airport consisting of departure/arrival halls, security
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area
, and the pier, there will be
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some
significant
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changes
to the pier
as well
as the construction of new architectural features.

Looking at the maps, the pier will undergo a notable
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change
, which will
be expanded
towards both the top-right and top-
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left
corners for the addition of ten more gates.
Furthermore
, the walkway will
be cleared
to
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make
way for the sky train a year later.

Moving to the departure/arrival
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area
, the bag drop
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zone
will replace the
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check
-in
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zone
, which will be
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moved
to the opposite side.
Also
, the café will
be relocated
to the
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left
corner of the entrance.
Moreover
, there will be an expansion in the
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area
of the arrival hall, and the car hire
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area
will
be established
in the new ground.
Additionally
, a café and an ATM
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zone
will be
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added
on the same side of the car hire
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zone
.
Finally
, there is no remarkable
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change
in the security
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area
,
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except for
the appearance of shops near the security passport control.
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IELTS academic The maps illustrate the plan to redevelop the Southwest airport in the following year.

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6.5
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