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A diagram showed the process of electricity caused by hydroelectric power station

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The diagram indicated that the day-night shift procedures of hydroelectric power station generating electricity The first step is to form a high-level reservoir at the end of a river by establishing a tall dam to restore the water. Additionally, there is an intake at the bottom of the dam. During in the daytime, the intake will be opened in order to allow a part of water in the reservoir to fall down to the power station. In the following step, the reversible turbines of the power station will be rotated by the water flow, operating the generator to produce electricity which is delivered to the National grid through the long distant power lines. The water flowing into the power station eventually is poured into a low-level reservoir. To the contrast, this water will be repumped into the high-level reservoir at night when the intake is closed for accumulating the water until next day. To conclude, the process of generating electricity by using the water of a river depends on two reservoirs in different levels
The diagram indicated that the day-night shift procedures of hydroelectric
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station
generating electricity

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first
step is to form a high-level
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reservoir
at the
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end
of a river by establishing a tall dam to restore the
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water
.
Additionally
, there is an intake at the bottom of the dam. During in the daytime, the intake will
be opened
in order to
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allow
a part of
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water
in the
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reservoir
to fall down to the
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power
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station
. In the following step, the reversible turbines of the
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power
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station
will
be rotated
by the
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water
flow, operating the generator to produce electricity which
is delivered
to the National grid through the long distant
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power
lines. The
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water
flowing into the
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power
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station
eventually
is poured
into a low-level
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reservoir
. To the contrast, this
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water
will be
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repumped
into the high-level
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reservoir
at night when the intake
is closed
for accumulating the
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water
until
next
day.

To conclude
, the process of generating electricity by using the
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water
of a river depends on two
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reservoirs
in
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different
levels
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IELTS academic A diagram showed the process of electricity caused by hydroelectric power station

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3 paragraphs
173 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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