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The charts give information about the amount of water usage in six different areas of the world

The charts give information about the amount of water usage in six different areas of the world MmxQa
The charts give information about the amount of water usage in six different areas of the world for three purposes - namely industrial, agricultural and domestic use. Overall, North America and Europe used the major percentages of water for industries while the remaining continents used a major proportion of water for irrigation. To be more specific, there was a significant disparity in water use in North America and South America. As can be seen, North America consumed more water for industrial purposes (48%) while industrial purposes only required only about 10% average in South America. In addition, a major portion of water consumption could be observed in the agricultural sector which was higher in South America than that of North America. More than 79% of water in Southern parts went into agricultural fields while this percentage was only 39% in North America. Interestingly, water consumption in North and South America also showed a contrasting scenario in the percentage of household water consumption when it is clear from the charts that South American regions used 19% of water for domestic while North American countries used 13% for their household needs. On the other hand, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia shared striking similarities in water consumption for these purposes. A significantly large proportion of agricultural use of water in seen eastern regions. In Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia, the water consumption by agriculture was over 80% - the highest in the world. Moreover, only 7% to 9% of water was used by people in Asian and African countries for their personal use at home and the same trend could be seen when a small portion of water (5% to 12%) goes to industrial division. Finally, water distribution by sector in Europe was more equal than in other regions. Noticeably, in Europe, half of the water is consumed in the industrial sector while agricultural water use is 32%. Furthermore, Europe’s household water accounted for the least percentage with only 15%.
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for industries while the remaining continents
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13% for their household needs.

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eastern regions. In Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia, the
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distribution by sector in Europe was more equal than in other regions.
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