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The charts explain change about Households owning accommodation and renting accommodation in England and wales 1918 to 2011

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The charts explain change about Households owning accommodation and renting accommodation in England and wales 1918 to 2011. The percentage of the household in owned accommodation in 1939 is increase from 1918 but in 1953 it maintain the same level in 1939, Moreover in 1961 it rise up from 1953 and in 1981 a doubling in 1918. After that it increase from1953 until 1991 in contrary 2001 it maintain the same level in 1991. In 2011 it decrease from 2001, But the chart of the household in rented accommodation, it is decrease in 1936, Moreover in 1953 it maintain the same level in 1939, After that in 1961 that decline from 1953, until 1991. In 1991 it halve from 1918, But in 2001 it remain stable in 1991. In2011 it increase from 2001. Consequently, the charts showed opposite way the household in owned and rented accommodation that from 1918 until 2011.
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in England and wales 1918 to 2011. The percentage of the
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in 1939 is increase from 1918
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in 1953 it
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the same level in 1939,
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up from 1953 and in 1981 a doubling in 1918. After that it increase from1953 until 1991 in contrary 2001 it
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the same level in 1991. In
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from 2001,
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in rented
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accommodation
, it is decrease in 1936,
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in 1953 it
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the same level in 1939, After that in 1961 that decline from 1953, until 1991. In
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from 1918,
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in 2001 it
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stable in 1991. In2011 it
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opposite way the
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and rented
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accommodation
that from 1918 until 2011.
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IELTS academic The charts explain change about Households owning accommodation and renting accommodation in England and wales 1918 to 2011

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