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The graph illustrates the consumption of various street foods in Melbourne. Overall, the consumption of all street foods has increased from 2005. Hamburger is the most eaten fast food whereas Noodles and Fried rice are least chosen by customers. The highest shift can be seen in consumption of salad. The consumption of Hamburger is the highest acroos all years followed by Fried Chicken. People tend to prefer more healthy food as a considerable rise in eating salad can be seen from 2005 till Present and in 2025 the units of salad eaten is more than double as compared to present eating habits. There is no significant change in the consumption of Fried Rice and Noodles. The rate at which people are consuming fast foods is higher in 2025 as compared to the present situation and 2005. At any point of time people preferred Hamburger as their favourite fast food as shown by the table.
The graph illustrates the
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in Melbourne.
Overall
, the
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of all street
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has increased from 2005. Hamburger is the most eaten
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fast
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whereas Noodles and Fried rice are least chosen by customers. The highest shift can be
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in
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of salad.

The
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of Hamburger is the highest
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all years followed by Fried Chicken.
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tend to prefer more healthy
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as a considerable rise in eating salad can be
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from 2005 till Present and in 2025 the units of salad eaten is more than double as compared to present eating habits. There is no significant
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in the
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consumption
of Fried Rice and Noodles. The rate at which
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are consuming
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fast
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foods
is higher in 2025 as compared to the present situation and 2005. At any point of time
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people
preferred Hamburger as their
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as shown by the table.
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IELTS academic street foods in Melbourne

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
154 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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