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Science Park Map The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Science Park Map The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today. 5LPpn
The Maps portrays the information about a science park in year 2008 and the similar Park of on temporary time with a numerous alterations as well as some new developments. To begin with Northen-western side, in former year the area which was Covered with geenland at present it is changed into research and development sector. While, the location of offices and business units are unmodified, nevertheless: university hub take place of reception meanwhile, woodland has distributed in two sides at offices as well as university hub. Moving toward other amendments, the location of car park is stable with little reduction in size, nonetheless, cycle track is also newly established in recent time period. Particularly, IT center is converted into innovation centre which is adjacent side of the water south west woodland. However, the cyber security expands double than past, railway Station is removed and bus stop is Newly built along with road of South east which go towards cycle track. Overall, it is apparent clear that, science park has pletora of amenities available now such as cycling track, innovation centre, research and development center, whereas, some areas are demolished and some are reallocated.
The Maps
portrays
the information about a science
park
in year 2008 and the similar
Park
of on temporary time with a numerous
alterations
as well
as
some
new developments.

To
begin
with
Northen-western
side, in former year the area which
was Covered
with
geenland
at present it is
changed
into research and development sector. While, the location of offices and business units
are unmodified
,
nevertheless
: university hub take place of reception meanwhile, woodland has distributed in two sides at offices
as well
as university hub.

Moving toward other amendments, the location of car
park
is stable with
little
reduction in size, nonetheless, cycle
track
is
also
newly
established in recent time period.
Particularly
, IT center
is converted
into innovation
centre
which is adjacent side of the water
south west
woodland.
However
, the cyber security expands
double
than past, railway Station
is removed
and bus
stop
is

Newly
built along with road of South east which go towards cycle
track
.

Overall
, it is apparent
clear
that, science
park
has
pletora
of amenities available
now
such as cycling
track
, innovation
centre
, research and development center, whereas,
some
areas
are demolished
and
some
are reallocated
.
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IELTS academic Science Park Map The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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