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The charts depict temperature and rainfall in Equatorial climate and Mediterranean climate. The units are measured in Celcius and millimetres.

The charts depict temperature and rainfall in Equatorial climate and Mediterranean climate. The units are measured in Celcius and millimetres. dpE9P
Overall, it can be observed that temperature remains relatively constant throughout the Year in the Equatorial climate while, it peaks in August in the Mediterranean climate. In December it rains most in the Equatorial climate followed by November however, in the Mediterranean climate January receives the most rainfall. In the Equatorial climate level of rainfall remains steadily constant with a slight increase or decrease from 250mm. The highest rainfall was calculated in December, accounting for nearly 300 cu mm. It is followed by November, amounting to 250 cu mm. Now turning to the Mediterranean climate, maximum rainfall was noted in the first month, which was 170 cu mm. It is followed by last month, constituting 150 cu mm. The temperature increased at near about 26000 degrees Celcius between June and July. The temperature of the year stood at 140 degrees Celcius and 200 degrees Celcius in January and April, respectively.
Overall
, it can
be observed
that temperature remains
relatively
constant throughout the Year in the Equatorial
climate
while, it peaks in August in the Mediterranean
climate
. In
December it
rains most in the Equatorial
climate
followed by November
however
, in the Mediterranean
climate
January receives the most rainfall.

In the Equatorial
climate
level of rainfall remains
steadily
constant with a slight increase or decrease from
250mm
. The highest rainfall
was calculated
in December, accounting for
nearly
300 cu mm. It
is followed
by November, amounting to 250 cu mm.

Now
turning to the Mediterranean
climate
, maximum rainfall
was noted
in the
first
month, which was 170 cu mm. It
is followed
by last month, constituting 150 cu mm. The temperature increased at near about 26000 degrees
Celcius
between June and July. The temperature of the year stood at 140 degrees
Celcius
and 200 degrees
Celcius
in January and April,
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The charts depict temperature and rainfall in Equatorial climate and Mediterranean climate. The units are measured in Celcius and millimetres.

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