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The charts depict temperature and rainfall in Equatorial climate and Mediterranean climate. The units are measured in Celcius and millimetres.

The charts depict temperature and rainfall in Equatorial climate and Mediterranean climate. The units are measured in Celcius and millimetres. dpE9P

Overall, it can be observed that temperature remains relatively constant throughout the Year in the Equatorial climate while, it peaks in August in the Mediterranean climate. In December it rains most in the Equatorial climate followed by November however, in the Mediterranean climate January receives the most rainfall. In the Equatorial climate level of rainfall remains steadily constant with a slight increase or decrease from 250mm. The highest rainfall was calculated in December, accounting for nearly 300 cu mm. It is followed by November, amounting to 250 cu mm. Now turning to the Mediterranean climate, maximum rainfall was noted in the first month, which was 170 cu mm. It is followed by last month, constituting 150 cu mm. The temperature increased at near about 26000 degrees Celcius between June and July. The temperature of the year stood at 140 degrees Celcius and 200 degrees Celcius in January and April, respectively.

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, it can be observed
 that temperature remains relatively
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climate
 while, it peaks in August in the Mediterranean You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtemperaturehumidity
climate
. In The comma is probably missing here: "December, it".December, it
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 rains most in the Equatorial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtemperaturehumidity
climate
 followed by November however
, in the Mediterranean You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtemperaturehumidity
climate
 January receives the most rainfall.

In the Equatorial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtemperaturehumidity
climate
 level of rainfall remains steadily
 constant with a slight increase or decrease from Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "250 mm"250 mm
250mm
. The highest rainfall was calculated
 in December, accounting for nearly
 300 cu mm. It is followed
 by November, amounting to 250 cu mm.

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Now
 turning to the Mediterranean You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtemperaturehumidity
climate
, maximum rainfall was noted
 in the first
 month, which was 170 cu mm. It is followed
 by last month, constituting 150 cu mm. The temperature increased at near about 26000 degrees Possible spelling mistake found.Celsius
Celcius
 between June and July. The temperature of the year stood at 140 degrees Possible spelling mistake found.Celsius
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 and 200 degrees Possible spelling mistake found.Celsius
Celcius
 in January and April, respectively
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