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The following chart provides information about the worth of exports of a country regarding different categories from 2015 to 2016. And the table describes the rate of variation differentiated in every variety between 2015 and 2016. Overall, except for the gems and jewellery section, all categories raised the bar in 2016 compared to 2015. As well as the table indicates the bearish arrow for the gold and jewellery kind and bullish arrow for all other divisions. In the year 2015, the petroleum products which was in around 61 billion and by 2016 it lifts to 64 billion approximately. Next, the engineering goods performed well between 2015 and 2016 to boost their stats and reached almost 63 billion from around 55 billion. Whereas the gems and jewellery, in 2016, showed some downturn in their worth compared to 2015 and the value was dropped to 41 billion roughly from about 46 billion. The agricultural products resulted in a small growth and kept their yield around 32 billion in 2015 and 2016. And the textiles kind were the most surged sector between 2015 and 2016, which raised from about 26 billion to 32 billion approximately. As mentioned in the table petroleum products gained profits of 3% in a year. While engineering goods turnout 8. 5%. Whereas the gems and jewellery deteriorated its rate by 5. 8%. On the other hand, agricultural products maintained their consistency and pushed the worth by 0. 8%. And finally, the textiles division is the most benefited one than all others which prospered the value by 15. 8%

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 turnout 8. 5%. Whereas the gems and Possible spelling mistake. 'jewellery' is British English.jewelry
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