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Pie chart of Favourite take away in the UK

Pie chart of Favourite take away in the UK dlnYE
The pie chart demonstrates favourite takeaway in the UK. The most popular restaurant is Chinese and and in second place Indian restaurant is so popular. Both of them make up to third and also there is about One in ten proportion of pie chart never go take aways. Obviously Chinese restaurant make up most proportion of pie chart, moreover, it's about 34% and Indian restaurant has the most sediment after Chine's. About One in ten segment never order and similarly 10% of pie chart prefer Italian restaurant. Considerably, British Restaurant includes just 9% of favourite takeaways in the UK. The lowest proportional with diagram contains Mexican, Japanese, and Greek that they have  just 3% of pie chart and this proportion is exact similar in proportion of Thai. Overall, most of who live in the UK buy meals  of Chinese Indian restaurant and some of them would rather don't buy meals.
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demonstrates
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favourite
takeaway in the UK. The most popular
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is Chinese
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and and
in second place Indian
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is
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popular. Both of them
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there is about One in ten
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of
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never go take
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aways
.
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Chinese
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restaurant
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of
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,
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, it's about 34% and Indian
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has the most sediment after Chine's. About One in ten segment never order and
similarly
10% of
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prefer Italian
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.
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, British
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Restaurant
includes
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9% of
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favourite
takeaways in the UK. The lowest proportional with diagram contains Mexican, Japanese, and Greek that they have
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3% of
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and this
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is exact similar in
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of Thai.
Overall
, most of who
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live
in the UK
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buy
meals
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of Chinese Indian
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and
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IELTS academic Pie chart of Favourite take away in the UK

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