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The graph shows the percentage of unemployment rate of men and women in the six Nations for the year 1995 and 2005

The graph shows the percentage of unemployment rate of men and women in the six Nations for the year 1995 and 2005 al6pY

The provided compares the crucial information regarding proportion of improvement rates of men and women in the context of six distinct nation for the 1995 and 2005. Units are measured in percentage. overall, it is evident that there was an incline in the ratio of men employment ratio while female experienced the downward trend over the given period. To begin with, in terms of man, in 1995, male was over the 60% in Switzerland and Iceland and below the 60% in Australia and USA. Moreover, in the context of female, in 2005, all the figures experienced upward trend except New Zealand and Australia. while figures of man experienced downward trend in New Zealand. In 2005, male was higher than female and reached at the peak around 35%Moving further, in Ireland and Switzerland, figure of man in the year 1995 and 2005, was around 79% and 82% respectively. On the one hand, in the USA, all the figure dramatically increased in the comparison of female. Although figure of Iceland also experienced downward trend in the female employment rate around 42%. on the other hand, there was some fluctuation in the percentage of female and male in the period 1995 and 2005.

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