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The charts demonstrate predictions for global productions by sector in 2030 and 2050.

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The charts demonstrate predictions for global productions by sector in 2030 and 2050. Overall, in both years, the dominating global production is services and manufacturing. In general, global production from both outputs have only minimal change over the past two decades. Services production is anticipated to be 50. 2% in the first year and is predicted to have a slight increase of about a mere 1% in 2050. In addition, it is also estimated that production in manufacturing will have a minor growth from 30. 6% to 33. 1% in 2050. Although it is predicted that the production of global energy will be accounted for 6. 7% in 2030 and will be facing a drop to 4. 3% in 2050. Similarly, the production of agriculture is speculated to have a small decline from 4% to 2% in 2050. The projected proportion of info-com tech will be 5. 6% in 2030 and will have increased by 0. 2% in 2050 It is clear that despite the shifting in percentage from the past decades, the production in manufacturing and services are still the major global production
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is services and manufacturing.
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from both outputs have
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in manufacturing will have a minor growth from 30. 6% to 33. 1% in 2050. Although it
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energy will
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of agriculture
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decline from 4% to 2% in 2050. The projected proportion of info-com tech will be 5. 6% in 2030 and will have increased by 0. 2% in 2050

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