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the chart shows how popular four hobbies in 2000 as opposed to their popularity today.

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The bar chart provides information on the popularity of four different hobbies in 2000 compared to the present day. Overall, traveling and sports both became more popular over the period and are now the two hobbies, which people prefer the most. On the other hand, reading and walking have lost popularity since 2000. In 2000, most people preferred to go walking as their main hobby with 35% of respondents choosing this activity. Sports and traveling had the same level of popularity with 25%, while reading was the least popular past time with only 15%. Things are different today, because sports and traveling have overtaken walking to become the hobbies, which most people prefer as 40% of respondents have chosen each. Reading and walking both suffered a much larger decline in its popularity, dropping to only 12%.
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in 2000 compared to the present day.

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prefer the most.
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since 2000.

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preferred to go walking as their main
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with 35% of respondents choosing this activity. Sports and traveling had the same level of
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with 25%, while reading was the least popular
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prefer as 40% of respondents have chosen each. Reading and walking both suffered a much larger decline in its
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