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The charts below show workforce composition in the UK, and abaout average hourly earnings.

The charts below show workforce composition in the UK, and abaout average hourly earnings. pX72w
The graphs provide information about the composition of men and women in the United Kingdom’s labor force and the average number of revenue in an hour during the period in April 2010. Overall what stands out from the charts is that the proportion of men working full-time was higher than women; however the number of women working part-time exceeded the proportion of men. Observing the data in further detail, it is clear that full-time workers’ (men’s and women’s) revenue averaged around $13 and $11 respectively. Moreover, part-time employees' earnings showed relatively lower than full-time workers the females' income was approximately $8 while the males’ compensation was $7 per hour. According to the pie chart, there were significant differences in composition by gender. The men and women who work full-time jobs accounted for roughly a quarter and around a half correspondingly. In contrast, females made the highest contribution in half-time job constituted 21% whereas males made up merely 6% In summary, the total number of earnings contributed 24. 9 million. In addition, the income of full-time traders was twice as high as that of part-time employees.
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in the United Kingdom’s labor force and the average number of revenue in an hour during the period in April 2010.

Overall
what stands out from the charts is that the proportion of
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working full-time was higher than
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women
;
however
the number of
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working part-time exceeded the proportion of
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.

Observing the data in
further
detail, it is
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that full-time workers’ (
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men
’s and
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revenue averaged around $13 and $11
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.
Moreover
, part-time employees' earnings
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showed
relatively
lower than full-time workers the females' income was approximately $8 while the males’ compensation was $7 per hour.

According to the pie chart, there were significant differences in composition by gender. The
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men
and
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who work full-time jobs accounted for roughly a quarter and around a half
correspondingly
.
In contrast
, females made the highest contribution in half-time job constituted 21% whereas males made up
merely
6%

In summary, the total number of earnings contributed 24. 9 million.
In addition
, the income of full-time traders was twice as high as that of part-time employees.
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