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The diagram shows the production of bricks. Summarize the process.

The diagram shows the production of bricks. Summarize the process. GrBMQ
The illustration provided displays the various steps of the process by which bricks are produced, packaged, and ultimately distributed. Overall, this is a multi-stage man-made process that begins with the extraction of natural resources and ends with the packaging and distribution of bricks. To begin, large machines called diggers are used to extract clay from the earth. The clay is then placed by diggers onto a metal grid, which sifts out larger particles and then rolls the remaining fine clay into a mixture of sand and water. At this point, the mixture is either placed into moulds or into a machine which uses a wire cutter to produce bricks of a standard size. Following this, they are placed into a drying oven for as many as two days. Once dry, the unbaked bricks are placed into a kiln, baked initially at lower temperatures, then higher temperatures, and then allowed to cool in a chamber for two to three days. Once adequately cooled, they are packaged on pallets, which are then loaded onto delivery trucks for distribution.
The illustration provided displays the various steps of the process by which bricks
are produced
,

packaged, and
ultimately
distributed.

Overall
, this is a multi-stage
man
-made process that
begins
with the extraction of natural resources and

ends with the packaging and distribution of bricks.

To
begin
, large machines called diggers are
used
to extract clay from the earth. The clay is then placed

by diggers onto a metal grid, which sifts out larger particles and then rolls the remaining fine clay into a

mixture of sand and water. At this point, the mixture is either placed into
moulds
or into a machine

which
uses
a wire cutter to produce bricks of a standard size. Following this, they
are placed
into a

drying oven for as
many
as two days.

Once dry, the unbaked bricks
are placed
into a kiln, baked
initially
at lower temperatures, then higher

temperatures, and then
allowed
to cool in a chamber for two to three days. Once
adequately
cooled,

they
are packaged
on pallets, which are then loaded onto delivery trucks for distribution.
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