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The chart illustrates an estimation of sales of jeans for Mango and Jack & Jones Companies from Turkey from January to December next year. Overall, as per the prediction, sales will be the highest in December for both companies. However, in February, it shows that sales trend will be the lowest. Furthermore, turnover for Mango and Jack & Jones companies will have no significant changes for the month of July. As per the graph, the figures for Mango company shows approximately 100 thousands of pairs for the month of January as opposed to Jack & Jones company where the sales will be over double of the first company (about 450 thousands). On the other hand, December depicts sales will be the highest for Jack & Jones company for about 900 thousands where as it will be the lowest in the month of February (approximately 250 thousands). Moreover, the month of July will be having a slight change for about 50 thousands only between the two companies.
The chart illustrates an estimation of
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of jeans for Mango and Jack &
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Jones
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from Turkey from January to December
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, as per the prediction,
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will be the highest in December for both
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that
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trend will be the lowest.
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, turnover for Mango and Jack &
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Jones
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will have no significant
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for the
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of July.

As per the graph, the figures for Mango
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100 thousands of
pairs for the
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of January as opposed to Jack &
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Jones
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where the
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will be over double of the
first
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(about 450 thousands).

On the other hand
, December depicts
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will be the highest for Jack &
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Jones
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company
for about 900 thousands
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of February (approximately 250 thousands).
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, the
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of July will be having a slight
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for about 50 thousands
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