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the diagram below shows the process of producing a pencil

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The given diagram illustrates the procedure of manufacturing wooden pencils over a twelve-staged process, starting from planting the seeds to packing up the pencils into one box. At the beginning of the process, seeds are first planted and nursed for four months before they are grown into saplings and get replanted. After the forest planting, the seedlings are allowed to grow for three years before being thinned to create more space. After another 14 years, the mature trees are then ready to be harvested for wood. In the next step, the harvested timber is then cut by an automatic saw into thin slats. Once the stats get dried by the treatment for sixty days, sticks of black lead will be glued on the dried slats into grooves, then a new slat will be placed upon the old one. Next, the two slats are put in the pressing machine for hard-pressing using heat, and are subsequently cut into pencils for final production. Hence, when pencils are made after the pencils slices are painted, sharpened, and stamped, they are ready to be packaged as a final step. Overall, in order to fabricate wooden pencils, wood is collected to be assembled into thin slats, which are used in the manufacturing process, and final products are packaged in the end.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 diagram illustrates the procedure of manufacturing wooden You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlightradiationglimmer
pencils
 over a twelve-staged process, starting from planting the seeds to packing up the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlightradiationglimmer
pencils
 into one box. At the beginning of the process, seeds are first
 planted and nursed for four months This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 they are grown
 into saplings and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 replanted. After the forest planting, the seedlings are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to grow for three years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
being thinned
 to create more space. After another 14 years, the mature trees are then ready to be harvested
 for wood.

In the next
 step, the harvested timber is then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 by an automatic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 into thin You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
slats
. Once the stats This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 dried by the treatment for sixty days, sticks of black lead will be glued
 on the dried You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
slats
 into grooves, then a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
slat
 will be placed
 upon the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 one. Next
, the two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
slats
are put
 in the pressing machine for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
-pressing using heat, and are subsequently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlightradiationglimmer
pencils
 for final production. Hence
, when You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlightradiationglimmer
pencils
are made
 after the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlightradiationglimmer
pencils
 slices are painted
, sharpened, and stamped, they are ready to be packaged
 as a final step. Overall
, in order to fabricate wooden You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlightradiationglimmer
pencils
, wood is collected
 to be assembled
 into thin You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
slats
, which are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in the manufacturing process, and final products are packaged
 in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
. 