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Average annual Gross Domestic Product (GDP) growth

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The chart shows the average GDP growth per decade for the three different types of countries over a period of 30 years. In the 1960s, wealthy countries experienced the highest annual GDP at close to 5 per cent. This figure is double that of the non-global countries and three times that of the countries operating on a global level. The two greatest troughs occurred in the GDP of globalizers in 1960 and non-globalizers in 1980. However, by the 1970s, this trend changed substantially; the globalizers rose from a low of approximately 1. 2 per cent in 1960 to a peak of 2. 9 per cent in 1970 and there was also an increase in the GDP of the non-global countries, while the wealthy countries fell to a low of 2. 9 per cent. In the 1980s and 90s, as the technology made globalization even easier, the decreasing trend for the wealthy countries continued declining by 2. 2 per cent and 2 per cent in 1980 and 1990 respectively. On the other hand, for the countries that embraced globalization, the GDP figures rose significantly throughout this time, and by the 1990s, had reached a peak at nearly 5 per cent. That is even more than the GDP of wealthy countries in the 1960s.
The chart
shows
the average GDP growth per decade for the three
different
types of
countries
over a period of 30 years. In the 1960s,
wealthy
countries
experienced the highest annual GDP at close to 5 per cent. This figure is double that of the non-global
countries
and three times that of the
countries
operating on a global level. The two greatest troughs occurred in the GDP of
globalizers
in 1960 and
non-globalizers
in 1980.

However
, by the 1970s, this trend
changed
substantially
; the
globalizers
rose from a low of approximately 1. 2 per cent in 1960 to a peak of 2. 9 per cent in 1970 and there was
also
an increase in the GDP of the non-global
countries
, while the
wealthy
countries
fell to a low of 2. 9 per cent.

In the 1980s and 90s, as the technology made globalization even easier, the decreasing trend for the
wealthy
countries
continued declining by 2. 2 per cent and 2 per cent in 1980 and 1990
respectively
.
On the other hand
, for the
countries
that embraced globalization, the GDP figures rose
significantly
throughout this time, and by the 1990s, had reached a peak at
nearly
5 per cent.
That is
even more than the GDP of
wealthy
countries
in the 1960s.
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IELTS academic Average annual Gross Domestic Product (GDP) growth

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