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The charts below show the United State of America patterns between 1966 and 1996

The charts below show the United State of America patterns between 1966 and 1996 xaXeg
The circular graphs illustrate the information about consuming of seven different categories of America between 1966 and 1996. The data is calibrating in proportion. It is vivid from the pie chart, the highest Proportion of food in 1966 about 44℅, while in 1996 it dwindled nearly 30℅as compared to last given period of time. There was a yawning gap between cars into the year. The respective figure were 45℅. Despite this, In the USA the measures of books which was 7℅ in 1966 and it reduced drastically and accessed at 1℅. The utilising ratio of Restaurants in 1996 rose significantly to 14℅, from 7℅in 1966. The percentage of furniture stood at 10 as against 1 in case of computer in 1966. The given figure of computer stole a March by 9 in 1996. Overall, In the United States of America the figuration of cars escalated as compared to others in last in year, while the computer is lower than other things in earlier period of time.
The circular graphs illustrate the information about consuming of seven
different
categories of America between 1966 and 1996. The data is calibrating in proportion. It is vivid from the pie chart, the highest Proportion of food in 1966 about 44℅, while in 1996 it dwindled
nearly
30℅as compared to last
given
period of time. There was a yawning gap between cars into the year. The respective figure were 45℅. Despite this, In the USA the measures of books which was 7℅ in 1966 and it
reduced
drastically
and accessed at 1℅. The
utilising
ratio of Restaurants in 1996 rose
significantly
to 14℅, from 7℅in 1966. The percentage of furniture stood at 10 as against 1 in case of computer in 1966.
The
given
figure of computer stole a March by 9 in 1996.
Overall
, In the United States of America the figuration of cars escalated as compared to others
in last in
year, while the computer is lower than other things in earlier period of time.
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