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The given charts compare the comments of 100visitors who evaluated the Parkway Hotel's customer service in 2005 and 2010by using the same questionnaire. Overall, it is clear that, there were significant changes in hotel's customer service which the proportion of positive feedbacks increased and negative assessment decreased in 2010 compared to 2005. In 2005, only 5% of the visitors considered that customer service was excellent and this percentage rose at 28% in 2010. The good impressions of guests about services accounted for 14% in 2005, after 5years, that rate almost trebled to 39%. Less than half of visitors mentioned that customer service was satisfactory in 2005 and this proportion made up 12% in 2010. The negative feedbacks which poor and very poor qualities of customer services went down in 2010 compared to 2005. In 2005 just under a quarter of guests rated customer service poor and 15% of them said that it was very poor. While these persentages dropped sharply in 2010 to 12% and 4% respectively.
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charts compare the comments of 100visitors who evaluated the Parkway Hotel's
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customer
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service
in 2005 and 2010by using the same questionnaire.

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, it is
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clear
that, there were significant
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changes
in hotel's
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customer
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service
which the proportion of
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positive
feedbacks increased and
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negative
assessment decreased in 2010 compared to 2005.

In 2005,
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only
5% of the visitors considered that
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customer
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service
was excellent and this percentage rose at 28% in 2010. The
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good
impressions of guests about
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services
accounted for 14% in 2005, after 5years, that rate almost trebled to 39%. Less than half of visitors mentioned that
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customer
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service
was satisfactory in 2005 and this proportion made up 12% in 2010. The
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negative
feedbacks which
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poor
and
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very
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poor
qualities of
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customer
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services
went down in 2010 compared to 2005. In 2005
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just
under a quarter of guests rated
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customer
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service
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poor
and 15% of them said that it was
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very
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poor
. While these
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persentages
dropped
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in 2010 to 12% and 4%
respectively
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IELTS academic The charts below show the results of a questionnaire

Academic
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3 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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