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The line graph shows that the consumption of spreads in margarine,low fat and reduce spreads and butter.

The line graph shows that the consumption of spreads in margarine, low fat and reduce spreads and butter. OMMR3

The intake of varied spreads, say, margarine, low fat and reduce spreads and butter for 26 years that is from 1981 to 2007 is what the trio line exhibits. It is immediate apparent that when it comes to 1981, butter was the clear winner by being consumed, 140 gram of the total spreads, followed by margarine, being the first runner up, at 90 gram. Low fat and reduce spreads, however was found to be at the least front of the chart with a mere of 10 gram, whereas a sharp rise was observed from 9 gram in 1981 to 81 gram in 2001, afterwards there was a slight fall from 2001 and 2007. With regards to margarine, the consumption of spreads had a gradual fall from 1981 to 1986, but afterwhich a slight increase from 1986 to 1996 then there was a stability seen for 2 years, leading to a continuously fall until 2007. On the other hand, in the utilisation of butter had a gradual incline from 1981 to 1986, after that a declined sharply was seen from 160 gram in 1986 to 50 gram in 2007. In general, what stands out from the graph is, butter bore the flag in the case of 1981, while it wal low fast and reduced spreads that dominated the former in terms of 2007.

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spreads
, say, margarine, low This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
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spreads
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoilshorteningmargarine
butter
 for 26 years that is
 from 1981 to 2007 is what the trio line exhibits. It is immediate apparent that when it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
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butter
 was the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 winner by being consumed
, 140 Possible agreement error. The noun 'gram' seems to be countable, so consider using: "grams".grams
gram
 of the total You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadvanceescalationtransmissionspreadingadvancementdissemination
spreads
, followed by margarine, being the first
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runner up
, at 90 Possible agreement error. The noun 'gram' seems to be countable, so consider using: "grams".grams
gram
. Low This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
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spreads
, however
was found
 to be at the least front of the chart with a mere of 10 Possible agreement error. The noun 'gram' seems to be countable, so consider using: "grams".grams
gram
, whereas a sharp rise was observed
 from 9 Possible agreement error. The noun 'gram' seems to be countable, so consider using: "grams".grams
gram
 in 1981 to 81 Possible agreement error. The noun 'gram' seems to be countable, so consider using: "grams".grams
gram
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from 2001 and 2007
. Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".In regard toWith regard toRegarding
With regards to
 margarine, the consumption of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadvanceescalationtransmissionspreadingadvancementdissemination
spreads
 had a gradual fall from 1981 to 1986, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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afterwhich
 a slight increase from 1986 to 1996 then there was a stability This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 for 2 years, leading to a You used an adverb ('continuously') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('fall') instead of another adjective.
continuously fall
 until 2007. On the other hand
, in the Possible spelling mistake. 'utilisation' is British English.utilization
utilisation
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoilshorteningmargarine
butter
 had a gradual incline from 1981 to 1986, after that a declined sharply
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 from 160 Possible agreement error. The noun 'gram' seems to be countable, so consider using: "grams".grams
gram
 in 1986 to 50 Possible agreement error. The noun 'gram' seems to be countable, so consider using: "grams".grams
gram
 in 2007. In general
, what stands out from the graph is, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoilshorteningmargarine
butter
 bore the flag in the case of 1981, while it Possible spelling mistake found.waswaywarwalkwallWall
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fast
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
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spreads
 that dominated the former in terms of 2007. 