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Household recycling in the UK, France and Germany over the period from 2005 to 2015.

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The line graph provides information about the rate of household recycling in the UK, France and Germany over the period from 2005 to 2015. It can be seen that rates of recycling in the UK and Germany both experienced significant improvements, rising to first and second place respectively. In contrast, the rate in France witnessed a steady fall, dropping from first to third place overall, despite recovering in the last two years. Turning to the detail, the average recycling rate in the UK initially grew from 35% to 40% in 2007, and then flattened out until 2009, after which it increased significantly, ending the period with the highest figure at over 60%. Recycling in Germany also shot up dramatically during the period but more steadily than in the UK, rising from 20% in 2005 to well over 55% in 2015. By contrast, despite starting with the highest figure, there was a remarkable fall in France from an initial 50% to only 30% in 2013. There was a recovery at the end of the period, finishing with a rate of approximately 40%.
The line graph provides information about the
rate
of household recycling in the UK,

France and Germany over the period from 2005 to 2015. It can be
seen
that
rates
of

recycling in the UK and Germany both experienced significant improvements, rising to

first
and second place
respectively
.
In contrast
, the
rate
in France witnessed a steady fall,

dropping from
first
to third place
overall
, despite recovering in the last two years.

Turning to the detail, the average recycling
rate
in the UK
initially
grew from 35% to 40%

in 2007, and then flattened out until 2009, after which it increased
significantly
, ending

the period with the highest figure at over 60%. Recycling in Germany
also
shot up

dramatically
during the period
but
more
steadily
than in the UK, rising from 20% in 2005

to well over 55% in 2015.

By contrast, despite starting with the highest figure, there was a remarkable fall in France

from an initial 50% to
only
30% in 2013. There was a recovery at the
end
of the period,

finishing with a
rate
of approximately 40%.
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IELTS academic Household recycling in the UK, France and Germany over the period from 2005 to 2015.

Academic
  American English
6 paragraphs
181 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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