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the charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.

the charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. dby7
The proportion of visitors’ response in the surveys about costumer service of the Parkway Hotel over a five-year period is sketched out in the two charts Generally speaking, it is worth noting that the rating of customer service with excellent, satisfactory and good increased, whereas the other ratings decreased during half a decade. To begin with, the customer service assessment both excellent and good increased dramatically. Excellent assessment of customer service accounted for 5 percent in initial years, and witnessed a more than fivefold leap to just below a third in the next five years. Additionally, increasing from one in twenty in the first year, good assessment of customer service rose by a quarter in the last year which made it the highest one amongst others. In the stark contrast, the other assessments which was decreased by the end of period were satisfactory, very poor and poor. However, the satisfactory fell by 28 percent which was the highest number of noticeable reduction midst others. It started at more than two fifths (45%) in 2005, and then decreased marginally around twofold in the final year. Apart from that, both very poor and poor assessment decreased by 11% and 9% respectively during five years.
The proportion of visitors’ response in the surveys about costumer
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of the Parkway Hotel over a five-year period
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out in the two charts

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speaking, it is worth noting that the rating of
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customer
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service
with excellent, satisfactory and
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good
increased, whereas the other ratings
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decreased
during half a decade.

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with, the
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both excellent and
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increased
dramatically
. Excellent
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of
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accounted for 5 percent in initial years, and witnessed a more than fivefold leap to
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below a third in the
next
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,
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of
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rose by a quarter in the last
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which made it the highest one amongst others.

In the stark contrast, the other
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which was
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of period were satisfactory,
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and
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.
However
, the satisfactory fell by 28 percent which was the highest number of noticeable reduction midst others. It
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at more than two fifths (45%) in 2005, and then
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marginally
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. Apart from that, both
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and
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decreased
by 11% and 9%
respectively
during five years.
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IELTS academic the charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.

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