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The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. A75N
The bar chart illustrates the evaluation of one country's exports in different parts between 2015 and 2016. The table shows percent vary on each category. Overall, it can be evidently seen that all earnings of categories' exports experienced upward tendency during these years, except gems and jewellery, which can be explained by decreasing of their percent values. In terms of table, all of products' percentages grew, besides gems and jewellery. When it comes to rising statistics, the export's earnings of petroleum products and engineered good underwent rising tendency by being 62 and 61 billions, respectively. This is because their shares rose during these years, first one rose 3% and latter one grew 8. 5%. As regards to Textiles, even their export earnings lower than others, their shares observed a sharp rising trend, from 25billions to 32 billions, which was a rise 10% increase. With regards to remaining categories, the earning from exportation of agricultural commodities was almost constant between two years, by rising 0. 81%, it was approximately 31 billions. As for the incomes from the exports of gems and jewellery, their percent values underwent downward trend, from 43 billions to 40 billions ( losing with 5. 18%).
The bar chart illustrates the evaluation of one country's
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earnings
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exports
experienced upward tendency during these years, except gems and
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jewellery
, which can be
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explained
by decreasing of their percent values. In terms of table, all of products' percentages grew,
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gems and
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jewellery
.

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earnings
of petroleum products and engineered
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good
underwent
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tendency by being 62 and 61
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billions
,
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. This is
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their shares rose during these years,
first
one rose 3% and latter one grew 8. 5%. As regards to Textiles, even their
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export
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earnings
lower than others, their shares observed a sharp
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rising
trend, from
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25billions
to 32
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billions
, which was a rise 10% increase.

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remaining categories, the
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from exportation of agricultural commodities was almost constant between two years, by
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rising
0. 81%, it was approximately 31
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billions
. As for the incomes from the
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exports
of gems and
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jewellery
, their percent values underwent downward trend, from 43
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billions
to 40
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billions
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losing with 5. 18%).
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

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