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The charts below show the result of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reason why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. v.3

The charts below show the result of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reason why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. v. 3
The diagrams illustrate the motive of adult education and how the course fees should be funded, according to the survey participants. Overall, it can be observed that the primary stirring factors for adults to study is their interest in subjects and to enhance their qualifications. The largest proportion of the people opined that individuals seeking for further studies should bear the cost. According to the data provided, we can clearly notice that 40% of the grown-ups continue their education due to their interest in subjects they study, while 38% enrol to gain qualifications. Whereas only one in five studies to improve their prospects of promotion, the same ratio enjoys learning. 22% continue their education because it is helpful for their running jobs. Finally, 12% study further to change their present jobs, and the remaining 9% study to interact with new people. Regarding the cost of the courses, 40% of the survey takers think that adult education cost should be paid by individuals. 35% believe their employers should take the responsibility and only one-fourth outlines that it should be collected from the taxpayers' money.
The diagrams illustrate the motive of adult
education
and how the course fees should
be funded
, according to the survey participants.
Overall
, it can
be observed
that the primary stirring factors for adults to
study
is their interest in subjects and to enhance their qualifications. The largest proportion of the
people
opined that individuals seeking for
further
studies
should bear the cost.

According to the data provided, we can
clearly
notice that 40% of the grown-ups continue their
education
due to their interest in subjects they
study
, while 38% enrol to gain qualifications. Whereas
only
one in five
studies
to
improve
their prospects of promotion, the same ratio enjoys learning. 22% continue their
education
because
it is helpful for their running jobs.
Finally
, 12%
study
further
to
change
their present jobs, and the remaining 9%
study
to interact with new
people
.

Regarding the cost of the courses, 40% of the survey takers
think
that adult
education
cost should
be paid
by individuals. 35% believe their employers should take the responsibility and
only
one-fourth outlines that it should
be collected
from the taxpayers' money.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic The charts below show the result of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reason why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. v. 3

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
183 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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