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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. 2mlX

The given charts show water consumption (in percentage) for various requirements in six area of the world. The water usage in the industrial sector was more in the developed areas. The water used for the agricultural activities was more in all areas, except North America and Europe. The highest amount of water, 88%, used in the agrarian sector was in the Central Asia region, closelly followed by Africa (84%) and South Asia (81%). The industrial sector in Europe consumed more water (53%) compared to other areas. North America also used nearly the same quantity (48%). The least amount of water used in the Central Asia, nearly 5%. The water used for domestic purpose was low in each region. South America consumed more water at 19% whereas Asia (Centtral and South East) used least.

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