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The garph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries

The garph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries J8Vk
The line graph shows the international water uses in 3 sectors, while the table illustrates the amount of water consumption in Brazil and the democratic republic of congo. Overall, the biggest sector that consumes water was agriculture, and congo uses a larger amount of water than Brazil. Regarding the line graph, agricultural uses of water were about 500 km3 in 1900 and continued to rise over time to reach its peak in 2000 at around 3000 km3. Industrial uses and domestic uses started at the same figures in 1900 at about 100 km3. However, the former increased more rapidly in comparison to the latter to reach around 1500 km3 in 2000, leaving the domestic uses at just below 500 km3 in the same year. When it comes to the table, Brazil, which has 176 million residents, consumes 26500 km2 of water for irrigation and 359 m3 for personal uses per year, while congo population uses 100 km2 for watering their lands and just 8m as a personal annual water consumption.
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the international
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in 3 sectors, while the table illustrates the amount of
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consumption in Brazil and the democratic republic of
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.

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, the biggest sector that consumes
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was agriculture, and
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congo
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a larger amount of
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than Brazil.

Regarding the line graph, agricultural
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of
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were about 500 km3 in 1900 and continued to rise over time to reach its peak in 2000 at around 3000 km3. Industrial
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and domestic
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uses
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at the same figures in 1900 at about 100 km3.
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at
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below 500 km3 in the same year.

When it
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to the table, Brazil, which has 176 million residents, consumes 26500 km2 of
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for irrigation and 359 m3 for personal
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uses
per year, while
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congo
population
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100 km2 for watering their lands and
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as a personal annual
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consumption.
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IELTS academic The garph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries

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