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The charts below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2000 and 2010, with projected sales for 2020.

The charts below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2000 and 2010, with projected sales for 2020. g57yA
The column chart below shows the number of magazine journals purchased by each person in five countries in 2000 and 2010, with expected sales for 2020. In general, country B accounts for the highest quantity of magazines sold per person while country E always occupies the lowest position. And it is predicted that, the number of magazines sold in countries A, B, and C will decrease by 2020. For country A, the number of magazines purchased was 39 in 2000, in 2010 dropped to 44, and by 2020, which is projected to drop to 48. In country B the number of magazines sold per individual rose slightly from 50 in 2000 to 47 in 2010 and is expected to decrease to 46 by 2020. The figure in country C has a similar trend, the figure in magazine sales per capita fell from 47 in 2000 to 45 in 2010 and is predicted to decline slightly to 43 by 2020. On the contrary, the quality of magazines in country D tends to increase. The number of magazines per person was 17 in 2000 and increased to 19 by 2010, which is expected to increase marginally to 22 by 2020. Meanwhile, the number of magazines sold each person in country E fluctuates by 0, 1. This number was 7 in 2000 and slightly increased to 9 in 2010, which is estimated to drop to 7 by 2020.
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