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The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995 bbAqY
The bar chart illustrates the number of Japanese tourists in millions who commuting abroad between a decade and line chart depicts the Share percentage of Japanese tourist market by Australia. Overall, it clearly stands out from the chart that the number of Japanese tourists were increasing by each passing year; however, Australia share the proportion of Japan's tourist market showed an upward trend. To begin with bar chart, almost 5 millions tourists were start their journey to abroad in the year 1985. In the next five years, the number of tourists who traveled overseas climbed by nearly 7 millions, while in 1991, the dramatic decrease depicts in tourists number from 11 millions in 1990 to 10 millions in 1991. In the year 1993, 1994, 1995 the number of Japanese tourist increase with 12, 14, 16 millions respectively. Turning to remaining details, the percentage of Japan's tourist market share from Australia presented the 2 percent in 1985 which escalate from 2 to roughly 5 percent in 1988 and previously increasing the proportion of Japan's tourist market shows sharp decrease with half percent in 1989, on the contrary in later years, it shows the increment in market share percentage.
The bar
chart
illustrates the
number
of Japanese
tourists
in
millions
who commuting abroad between a decade and line
chart
depicts the
Share
percentage of Japanese
tourist
market
by Australia.

Overall
, it
clearly
stands out from the
chart
that the
number
of Japanese
tourists
were increasing by each passing
year
;
however
, Australia
share
the proportion of Japan's
tourist
market
showed
an upward trend.

To
begin
with bar
chart
, almost 5
millions
tourists
were
start
their journey to abroad in the
year
1985. In the
next
five years, the
number
of
tourists
who traveled overseas climbed by
nearly
7
millions
, while in 1991, the dramatic decrease depicts in
tourists
number
from 11
millions
in 1990 to 10
millions
in 1991. In the
year
1993, 1994, 1995 the
number
of Japanese
tourist
increase with 12, 14, 16
millions
respectively
.

Turning to remaining
details
, the percentage of Japan's
tourist
market
share
from Australia presented the 2 percent in 1985 which escalate from 2 to roughly 5 percent in 1988 and previously increasing the proportion of Japan's
tourist
market
shows
sharp decrease with half percent in 1989,
on the contrary
in later years, it
shows
the increment in
market
share
percentage.

IELTS academic The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995

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