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The charts below show the native languages spoken by students at Rosalind High School in two different years.

The charts below show the native languages spoken by students at Rosalind High School in two different years. QwdB1
The pie charts illustrate the difference between the native language spoken by students at Rosalind High School in two different years, which are 2005 and 2015. From 2005 and 2015, the largest portion of spoken language is English, while the smallest is other languages. Then the number of spoken languages is even more distributed in 2015. In 2005, the majority of the students spoke English as their native language, which made up about 65%. The rest of the languages are Spanish, Chinese, and others. Spanish Twenty percent of a student speaks Spanish, 10% speaks Chinese, and 5% is spoken in other languages. From 10 years difference, the number is more distributed. Spanish speakers have increased from 20% to 35%, and Chinese speakers have increased to about 5%. While Spanish and Chinese languages have increased from 2005 to 2015, English as a native language has decreased from 65% to 45%, which is a 20% difference. Moreover, another language has remained the same as last 10 years. Overall, the native language from other countries such as Spanish and Chinese has increased in 2015. But, English has remained the most spoken native language in high school in two different years.
The pie charts illustrate the difference between the
native
language
spoken by students at Rosalind High School in two
different
years, which are 2005 and 2015.
From 2005 and 2015
, the largest portion of spoken
language
is English, while the smallest is
other
languages
. Then the number of spoken
languages
is even more distributed in 2015.

In 2005, the majority of the students spoke English as their
native
language
, which made up about 65%. The rest of the
languages
are Spanish, Chinese,
and others
. Spanish Twenty percent of a student speaks Spanish, 10% speaks Chinese, and 5%
is spoken
in
other
languages.

From 10 years difference, the number is more distributed. Spanish speakers have
increased
from 20% to 35%, and Chinese speakers have
increased
to about 5%. While Spanish and Chinese
languages
have
increased
from 2005 to 2015, English as a
native
language
has decreased from 65% to 45%, which is a 20% difference.
Moreover
, another
language
has remained the same as last 10 years.

Overall
, the
native
language
from
other
countries such as Spanish and Chinese has
increased
in 2015.
But
, English has remained the most spoken
native
language
in high school in two
different
years.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the native languages spoken by students at Rosalind High School in two different years.

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