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the charts below show the information about land use in four countries

the charts below show the information about land use in four countries 55E1Q
The gven pie chart illustrates the percentages of land used for different purposes in four countries namely Portugal, New Zealand, Canada and Norway. Overall, It is clear that non-agriculture comprisethe most land of these countries. Except to New Zealand the arable land of others is large than the pasture land. Looking at the pie chart, it can see that the proportion which non-agriculture purpose account for over 90% in Canada and Norway. While Arable just only takes up 3% and 5% of land in Norway and Canada respectively. Finally, the land use for pasture is constitute only 1% and the rates doubles in Canada. In contrast, portugar’s land non-agriculture account for more than a half of the chart (for about 57%) While the percentages of non-agriculture take over nearly a half in newzealand (about 51%). The land use for arable purpose in Portugal is about 34% while in Newzealand it account for only 1% in this purpose
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in four countries
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of these countries. Except to New Zealand the arable
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account for over 90% in Canada and Norway. While Arable
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in Norway and Canada
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1% and the rates doubles in Canada.

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non-agriculture account for more than a half of the chart (for about 57%) While the percentages of non-agriculture take over
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in Portugal is about 34% while in
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