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the maps show below the size of west farm and value of land per hactares over

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the maps show below the size of farm west and the value of land a per hectare over a period of 90 between 1900 and 1990The assigned maps illustrate the information about how the size of farm west and the value of land which changed during a 90-year-span. As far as west farm was concerned it accounted for 5000 hectares in 1990 and then it had exprienced a drop of 4150. the number of west farm was 500 in 1970, as opposed to, 1700 hactears in 1940. By 1990, it witnessed above two fold rise to 3500. When it comes to the value of land was a dollar in the very first year, then it inclined to 20 dollars. After 30 year a slight increase to 25 was exhibited. In the given last year, it showed contiuning significant rise and reach at its peak, which accounting to 125. overall, it is clear that the value of the land per hectares was constantly increased in the given time period while the size of west farm was flucatuating.
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a per hectare over a period of 90 between 1900 and 1990The assigned maps illustrate the information about how the size of
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farm
west and the
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of
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land
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changed
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was concerned
it accounted for 5000 hectares in 1990 and then it had
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the
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was 500 in 1970, as opposed to, 1700
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in 1940. By 1990, it witnessed above
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to 3500. When it
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significant rise and reach at its peak, which accounting to 125.
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time period while the size of west
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IELTS academic the maps show below the size of west farm and value of land per hactares over

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