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new supermarket in the town of Garlsdon

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A glance at the map provided illustrates the information about two propose locations for a new supermarket in the town of Garlsdon. Overall, what stands out from the map is the two locations under consideration are S1 and S2 which lies in the North West and in the center of the city, respectively. These sites could also be compared in terms of theirs positions relative to four other town and access by railway and main road. Looking at the information in more detail, the first potential S1 is on the top left-hand corner of the countryside. This particular location is situated fairly in close proximity Hindon, 12km away to the North- West; in addition, there is a railway from Hindon to Cransdon located roughly close to S1. Thanks to directional features mentioned above, the first site is more accessible in order to build a new supermarket. In terms of the second planned sites, S2 is located in the center of the town and in the bottom of the north Industry. Besides, S2 witnessed a long distance which is 25 and 16 km from there to Cransdon and Bransdon, respectively. Despite of the fact that this particular site is located approximately near railway and main roads, only railway is the most convenient because Town Centre is a no-traffic area. Both S1 And S2 are close to the railway which is from top left-hand corner to the bottom right-corner
A glance at the map provided illustrates the information about two propose locations for a new supermarket in the
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town
of
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Garlsdon
.

Overall
, what stands out from the map is the two locations under consideration are S1 and S2 which lies in the North West and in the center of the city,
respectively
. These
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sites
could
also
be compared
in terms of theirs positions relative to four other
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town
and access by
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railway
and main road.

Looking at the information in more detail, the
first
potential S1 is on the top
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left
-hand corner of the countryside. This particular location
is situated
fairly
in
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close proximity
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Hindon
,
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12km
away to the North- West;
in addition
, there is a
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railway
from
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Hindon
to
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Cransdon
located roughly close to S1. Thanks to directional features mentioned above, the
first
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site
is more accessible in order to build a new supermarket.

In terms of the second planned
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sites
, S2
is located
in the center of the
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town
and in the bottom of the north Industry.
Besides
, S2 witnessed a long distance which is 25 and 16 km from there to
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Cransdon
and
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Bransdon
,
respectively
.
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Despite of
the fact that this particular
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site
is located
approximately near
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railway
and main roads,
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only
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railway
is the most convenient
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because
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Town
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Centre
is a no-traffic area. Both S1 And S2 are close to the
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railway
which is from top
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left
-hand corner to the bottom
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right-corner
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IELTS academic new supermarket in the town of Garlsdon

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236 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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