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The chart below gives information about levels of education by age range in Glasgow in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about levels of education by age range in Glasgow in 2010. qkoJG
The bar graph compares 5 different age groups in Glasgow in terms of the educational levels in 2010. As can be inferred from the chart, while the bulk of people who had no qualifications were seen in the 75-and-above group, their 16-to-50 groups counterparts showed the reverse. Another key feature is that the 24-35 group accounted for the highest proportion of university degrees. The 16-24 and 35-50 groups mirrored precisely figures of the levels examined, with people having university degrees, school certificates, and no qualifications were 71%, 20%, and 9%, respectively. A somewhat similar pattern was witnessed in the 24-35 group, although registering the same data of unqualified people as the former, figures were both greater 5% in 2 remaining categories. Conversely, the percentage of no qualifications of the oldest group accounted for 72%, that to the school certification constituted the lowest, 3%. People who had university degrees in this group comprised 25%, doubling of that was their 50-75 counterparts. Figures across this sector surveyed balanced with 20% of schooling certificates and 30% of no qualifications.
The bar graph compares 5
different
age
groups
in Glasgow in terms of the educational levels in 2010.

As can
be inferred
from the chart, while the bulk of
people
who had no
qualifications
were
seen
in the 75-and-above
group
, their 16-to-50
groups
counterparts
showed
the reverse. Another key feature is that the 24-35
group
accounted for the highest proportion of university degrees.

The 16-24 and 35-50
groups
mirrored
precisely
figures of the levels examined, with
people
having university degrees, school certificates, and no
qualifications
were 71%, 20%, and 9%,
respectively
. A somewhat similar pattern
was witnessed
in the 24-35
group
, although registering the same data of unqualified
people
as the former, figures were both greater 5% in 2 remaining categories.

Conversely
, the percentage of no
qualifications
of the oldest
group
accounted for 72%, that to the school certification constituted the lowest, 3%.
People
who had university degrees in this
group
comprised 25%, doubling of that was their 50-75 counterparts. Figures across this sector surveyed balanced with 20% of schooling certificates and 30% of no
qualifications
.
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about levels of education by age range in Glasgow in 2010.

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