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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. DGxA
The pie charts compares average percentages of fat, salt and sugar intake which eaten by American people from different meals. Body needs to possess all of them unless they are eaten too much. It can clearly be seen from the charts that the proportion of consuming on sodium and saturated fat are the most amount in dinner, although sugar intake is the largest percentage at snack between meals. For more details look at the pie charts reveal that the most sodium and fat intakes are at dinner time, about 43 and 37%, respectively, although just 23% sugar is eaten at that time. According to pie charts, 29% salt and 26% saturated fat are used at lunchtime, although just 19% sugar are eaten at that time. When people are eating snack foods, they receive 14% sodium and 21% saturated fat, whilst 42% sugar send in their body. By contrast, the only meal, that eaten with similar amount of sodium, fat and sugar is breakfast time.
The pie
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compares average percentages of
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, salt and
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sugar
intake which
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by American
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meals. Body needs to possess all of them unless they are
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too much.

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from the
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that the proportion of consuming on sodium and saturated
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are the most amount in dinner, although
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sugar
intake is the largest percentage at snack between meals.

For more
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look at the pie
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reveal that the most sodium and
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intakes are at dinner time, about 43 and 37%,
respectively
, although
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23%
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sugar
is
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at that time.

According to pie
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, 29% salt and 26% saturated
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fat
are
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used
at lunchtime, although
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19%
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sugar
are
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at that time. When
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people
are eating snack foods, they receive 14% sodium and 21% saturated
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fat
, whilst 42%
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sugar
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in their body. By contrast, the
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meal, that
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with similar amount of sodium,
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fat
and
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sugar
is breakfast time.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

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