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the diagram below shows production of red wine.

the diagram below shows production of red wine. ranX2
The given process chart illustrares the information regarding that how red wine is produced with the help of grapes. In general, ten steps has been involved in the production of red wine, beginning with the selection of fresh wave and culminating with bottling. In the initial step, selection of grapes is and grapes keep in an anaerobic condition for two to three weeks Following this, grapes are crushed in crushing machine. After that, the mixture is inserted into a table for fermentation process including its skin. Later on the free Ranju was a separate out and the Residue of skin and stem are pressed the drainer, juice from there is also collected at the potale. Turning to the remaining in details, clarification is done by using the filter to purify the Jewel in the subsequent stage the find solution which is filter out is stored in the oaken casks for maturation for approximately six months to 2 years. Nextly, some edible acids and Sugars are added to the matured red wine before voting in order to adjust the taste of red wine.
The
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process chart
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illustrares
the information regarding that how
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red
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wine
is produced
with the
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help
of grapes.

In general
, ten steps has
been involved
in the production of
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red
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wine
, beginning with the selection of fresh wave and culminating with bottling.

In the initial step, selection of grapes is and grapes
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keep
in an anaerobic condition for two to three weeks Following this, grapes
are crushed
in crushing machine. After that, the mixture
is inserted
into a table for fermentation process including its skin. Later on the free
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Ranju
was a separate out and the Residue of skin and stem
are pressed
the drainer, juice from there is
also
collected at the
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potale
.

Turning to the remaining in
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details
, clarification
is done
by using the filter to purify the Jewel in the subsequent stage the find solution which is filter out
is stored
in the oaken casks for maturation for approximately six months to 2 years.
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Nextly
,
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some
edible acids and Sugars are
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added
to the matured
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red
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wine
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before
voting in order to adjust the taste of
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red
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wine
.
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