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The table below shows the information of money spent on four common items in UK in 1998

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The table industries and provide the information of the expenditure in a UK on a fourth common item in the 1998. It is clearly seen that women and adults and a maximum amount on food and least on the videos. looking at the detail it is prepared from the table that I'll spend maximum amount of their salary on a food and similar am on the electric and humid and music in the case of manner they where is pant 40% of food and in electric cube method to was recorded as 10 which is double has compared to the music interestingly more than one-third of women's earning was spent on a food for a b music 5% videos and electric equipment 1%. moving for the towards the remaining the most money utilised by children of music and less than a quarter of was on the electric you meant in the case of food and videos was accounted as 10% and 12% respectively the boys and girls where have similar trend in almost every area of expenditure and figuring out where 10% in a food 14 in music and 18 in videos
The table industries and provide the information of the expenditure in a UK on a fourth common item in the 1998. It is
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that women and adults and a maximum amount on
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food
and least on the
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looking
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food
and similar am on the
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electric
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where
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and in
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interestingly
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food
for a b
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and
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equipment 1%.
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moving
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by children of
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music
and less than a quarter of was on the
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electric
you meant in the case of
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food
and
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was accounted
as 10% and 12%
respectively
the boys and girls where have similar trend in almost every area of expenditure and figuring out where 10% in a
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food
14 in
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music
and 18 in
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videos
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IELTS academic The table below shows the information of money spent on four common items in UK in 1998

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