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The diagram shows the life cycle of mosquito.

The diagram shows the life cycle of mosquito. XOLr

The given pictorial representation depicts the information about the stages involved in the life cycle of a mosquito. Overall, it is lucid that, there are four stages in the life cycle which begin with a single egg and culminates at an adult mosquito. At the very first glance, it is clear that there are laid a a group of eggs which is called Egg raft then after laiding a single egg becomes larva and it has a conical tube which is called air tube. It is the second stage of mosquito's life cycle. Further more, after becoming larva, it grows and becomes pupa and it's mouth is bigger than that of larva. Eventually, pupa converts itself into an adult mosquito. After this the whole life cycle again continuously.

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