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Coffee and Tea drinking habits in 5 cities

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The bar graph depicts beverage consumptioni in last 4 weeks, more specifically coffee and tea in 5 different Australian cities. The data is caliberated in percentage. Overall, Survey shows that majority of people like to go to café for enjoying tea or coffee in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane and Hobart. Although people in Adelaide Likes to buy instant coffee as well as going to café. To begin with, People in Sydney buys 45% of fresh coffee in last 4 weeks which is highest among all cities, while people in Adelaide and Brisbane buys almost same, that is approximately 34% which is lowest among all cities. People in Hobart and Brisbane bought 54% and 53% Instant coffee in last 4 weeks respectively which is highest among all 5 cities. And Sydney bought 45% and it os lowest compared to other cities. Majority of people in Melbourne, Hobart ad Sydney bought 63%, 62% and 61% respectively from cafes and seems that people enjoy the coffee or tea bought from cafes then anywhere else.
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. The data is
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people
like to go to café for enjoying tea or
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coffee
in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane and Hobart. Although
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people
in Adelaide Likes to
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instant
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coffee
as well
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45% of fresh
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coffee
in last 4 weeks which is highest among all
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, while
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people
in Adelaide and Brisbane
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almost same,
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approximately 34% which is lowest among all
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in Hobart and Brisbane
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54% and 53% Instant
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coffee
in last 4 weeks
respectively
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cities
. And Sydney
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bought
45% and
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lowest compared to other cities.

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in Melbourne, Hobart ad Sydney
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bought
63%, 62% and 61%
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and seems that
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coffee
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IELTS academic Coffee and Tea drinking habits in 5 cities

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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