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the graph below show the number of tourist visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

the graph below show the number of tourist visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. gPlD
The lin graph illustrates how many tourists visited a caribbean island between 2010 and 2017In genera, the total number of people visiting caribean island increased remarkably throughout nearly a decade. Visitors who chose to stay on the island tend to be higher that of the other staying on cruise ships almost of this period. In 2010, the numbers of tourist visting caribbean island started at 4 millions people and rose to 3, 5 million after having a stable period between 2015 and 2016, which remained at 2, 75 million people. The starting point included 0, 75 million people who chose to stay on the island and only a third of them cose the other option. After a long period of nonstop changing, the quantity of tourists staying on cruise ships ended up at 2 million people. That is half million higher than the rest
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between 2010 and 2017In genera, the total number of
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tend to be higher that of the other staying on cruise ships almost of this period. In 2010, the numbers of tourist
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after having a stable period between 2015 and 2016, which remained at 2, 75
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. The starting point included 0, 75
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IELTS academic the graph below show the number of tourist visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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