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The charts below shoe the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The pie charts illustrate a comparative study regarding how much water was consumed for industrial, domestic and agriculture purposes in six parts of the world. Overall, the highest proportion of the water which was consumed for agricultural purpose in Africa, Asia and southe America, while North American and European countries used more water for thier industrial needs. To begin with, the consumption of water for agriculture was major in central Asia and Southe East Asia which was 88% and 81% respectively. Similarly, In Africa, the proportion of the water which was used for the agricultural needs was 84%. In contrast, the domestic use of water was at the rock bottom point in Asian countries compared yo others. In terms of Industrial purpose, consuming a greater percentage of water in North America, was almost identical to that of Europe, which as 48% and 53% respectively.
The pie charts illustrate a comparative study regarding how much
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for industrial, domestic and agriculture purposes in six parts of the world.

Overall
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for agricultural purpose in Africa, Asia and
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America, while North American and European countries
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industrial needs.

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East Asia which was 88% and 81%
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, In Africa, the proportion of the
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for the agricultural needs was 84%.
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, the domestic
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was at the rock bottom point in Asian countries compared
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others.

In terms of Industrial purpose, consuming a greater percentage of
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in North America, was almost identical to that of Europe, which as 48% and 53%
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IELTS academic The charts below shoe the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

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