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The first chart shows the population of England and Wales between 1700 and 2000. The second chart gives information about the birth and death rate in the same countries in the same period.

The two charts illustrate the population, and birth and death rates respectively of England and Wales in the years 1700, 1800, 1900, and 2000. Population is represented in the units of millions and the rates of birth and death are given per 1000 people. Overall, the number of people living in these areas of the UK rose consistently throughout the given time period. On the other hand, the birth and death rates fluctuated with highest rates for both in 1800 as opposed to the lowest birth rate in 1700 and the same for death rate in 2000. Birth rate was always higher than death rate for the given years. The population of England and Wales was less than 10 million in 1700 and the birth and death rates were about 9 and 7 per 1000 respectively. Both the birth and death rates increased dramatically in 1800 to about 23 and 17 respectively, resulting in a considerable growth in population to over 15 million. Although both the rates fell to about half of the previous century in 1900 (birth and death rates of 13 and 8 million respectively), the population more than doubled to reach just less than 40 million. On the other hand, these values changed only slightly in 2000 with population climbing to around 49 million as compared to the birth and death rates reaching just over 10 and exactly 5 respectively.
The two charts illustrate the
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of England and Wales in the years 1700, 1800, 1900, and 2000.
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were about 9 and 7 per 1000
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increased
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, resulting in a considerable growth in
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fell to about half of the previous century in 1900
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less than 40
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IELTS academic The first chart shows the population of England and Wales between 1700 and 2000. The second chart gives information about the birth and death rate in the same countries in the same period.

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