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The pie chrt shows the children's charity in the USA spent and gaines money over a year. Compare the relevant informtion and write the esy

Tje pie charts depict about the income and expenditure of the children's charity in the USA over a year. As an overview, it is notable that, the organization get maximum of money by donating food and program services utilizes major part of wages. From the chart it is cler that, 86. 6% of financial support is through donating food, which is the main source of income. However, community contributions are 8 times lesser as compared to the primary source. In addition to that, 2. 2% are provided by revenue programs. Through investment and Government they get 0. 2% each, whereas, other sources of income contribute double of it Interestingly, children's charity spend 95. 8% of their money for program services. They also give money for general aspects and which is around 2. 6 and 1. 6% respectively.
Tje
pie charts depict about the income and expenditure of the children's charity in the USA over a year.

As an overview, it is notable that, the organization
get
maximum of money by donating food and program services utilizes major part of wages.

From the chart it is
cler
that, 86. 6% of financial support is through donating food, which is the main source of income.
However
, community contributions are 8 times lesser
as
compared to the primary source.
In addition
to that, 2. 2%
are provided
by revenue programs. Through investment and
Government
they
get
0. 2% each, whereas, other sources of income contribute double of it

Interestingly
, children's charity spend 95. 8% of their money for program services. They
also
give money for general aspects and which is around 2. 6 and 1. 6%
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The pie chrt shows the children's charity in the USA spent and gaines money over a year. Compare the relevant informtion and write the esy

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