Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001.

The line graph illustrates the percentage of young people categorized according to different age in the UK from 1990 to 2001. It is clear that 0-4 and 10-14 age groups saw a dramatic change over the period shown, while the figure for other two age groups reached the similar percentage despite a slight fluctuation throughout the period. As can be seen from the graph, the proportion of young people aged 15-19 fell dramatically from just over 26% in 1990 to about 23% in 1993 before reaching 25% in 2001. By contrast, the figure for 5-9 age group show an opposite trend, which decreased to 25% in 2001 after rising from around 24. 5% in 1990 to just over 26% in 1997. As for children aged 10-14, the figure witnessed a considerable rise over the period of 11 years, rising from around 23% in 1990 to just over 26% in 2001. However, the percentage of children who were categorized by 0-4 declined dramatically to about 23. 5% in 2001 after remaining stable at around 26% during the period from 1990 to 1995.

The line graph illustrates the percentage of young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 categorized according to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 in the UK from 1990 to 2001.

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that 0-4 and 10-14 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 groups This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a dramatic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
 the period shown, while the figure for other two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 groups reached the similar percentage despite a slight fluctuation throughout the period.

As can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 from the graph, the proportion of young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 aged 15-19 fell dramatically
 from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
 26% in 1990 to about 23% in 1993 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 reaching 25% in 2001. By contrast, the figure for 5-9 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 group This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 an opposite trend, which decreased to 25% in 2001 after rising from around 24. 5% in 1990 to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
 26% in 1997.

As for children aged 10-14, the figure witnessed a considerable rise You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
 the period of 11 years, rising from around 23% in 1990 to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
 26% in 2001. However
, the percentage of children who were categorized
 by 0-4 declined dramatically
 to about 23. 5% in 2001 after remaining stable at around 26% during the period from 1990 to 1995. 